Beautiful Sadness

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wkamen
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Beautiful Sadness

Post by wkamen » November 16th, 2017, 12:09 pm

I have observed a reversion
to the wild;
the sounds,
the ivy,
the shrubs,
the trees,
shelter feral houses.



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Re: Beautiful Sadness

Post by November » November 16th, 2017, 12:15 pm

Very true ! My house and your poem have some points in common...

I loved your economy and your beautiful minimalism !! Brilliant ! My own text is just a chatterbox compared to this !



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Re: Beautiful Sadness

Post by Versus » November 18th, 2017, 6:07 am

Very nice. In fact, your poem inspired me thus I wrote 'a similar one'. You can find it in the Nature board named First Kiss. IF you'd like THIS poem 'of mine' to be 'our poem', that is to say, in the Co-writes Board, I'd be honored. Just send me a private message or contact one of the moderators to move it there. Thanks for the read. You are my inspiration.


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Re: Beautiful Sadness

Post by tangerinepie » December 10th, 2017, 10:38 am

Simplicity at it's best, imagining the wild mustangs running free is picturesque and inspiring.The natural world is immensely diverse and always rewarding to the senses..TY..Tangie..


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Re: Beautiful Sadness

Post by CarolynKleefeld » December 13th, 2017, 7:50 pm

Succinctly composed and beautifully expressed, a lot captured in just a few words, and much enjoyed.



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Re: Beautiful Sadness

Post by Sunday » December 15th, 2017, 8:12 pm

The wild and the wilderness is attractive only so long as we have the safety and security of the domestic life. But if it is like -no choice, well then we accept what we have.



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Re: Beautiful Sadness

Post by Versus » December 16th, 2017, 2:14 am

Sunday wrote:
December 15th, 2017, 8:12 pm
The wild and the wilderness is attractive only so long as we have the safety and security of the domestic life. But if it is like -no choice, well then we accept what we have.
Today is 'Saturday.' I'll read your comment tomorrow, having in mind temporal paradox.


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Re: Beautiful Sadness

Post by wordsmith » December 24th, 2017, 4:43 am

A most interesting read
Wordsmith


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Re: Beautiful Sadness

Post by Versus » December 24th, 2017, 7:00 am

Wordsmith: 'Word'!


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Re: Beautiful Sadness

Post by rupertpupkin » May 12th, 2020, 2:01 am

Well done on the spotlight for this wonderful piece of writing


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