A Drink and A glass

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A Drink and A glass

Post by thinkingheart » December 6th, 2012, 11:29 am

Drinking matured wine
painting purple crusts-
on love and lips,
marrying breaths to bubbles.

Bothered rims
provoked by falling ripples,
shining satiation-

A summer glint
embellish the glitter,
Fancies of the men around
forged through
dying lights.

Winter follows,
with drafts,
erosive caress-
slipping in haste.
over glass and lips.

Cyclic thus,
the glass partakes of-
emotive heart.



I Die everytime you gaze
a little longer,
Wish I could
but you are so transparent,
Sigh!

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Re: A Drink and A glass

Post by Jahaliel » December 7th, 2012, 11:35 pm

Good to have you back. I enjoyed this immensely, there's such a beauty to your words, a delicacy that is quite wonderful.


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Re: A Drink and A glass

Post by 3M2R » December 8th, 2012, 12:40 am

Very nice imagery simply love the last line of the first stanza. That putting lips to the drink (whatever drink it is). /takes up bottle to drink/ ><

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Re: A Drink and A glass

Post by Chelle » October 9th, 2016, 5:09 am

I don't drink wine but if I did, this poem would make me want some. Sounds like a very pleasant experience.


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