Of Birds And Shoes

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Wes Corona
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Of Birds And Shoes

Post by Wes Corona » June 9th, 2020, 7:54 am

I once had a pair of shoes,
that were made of rice.
They were very nice,
But the magpies,
kept eating them.

When they were done,
they got fat,
and couldn't fly.
So, I ate the magpies.

Despite their name,
they don't make good pies.


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Re: Of Birds And Shoes

Post by jamielou » June 12th, 2020, 11:23 am

Maybe you do not have the right recipes. Good one. My kind of poetry.
Louise


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Re: Of Birds And Shoes

Post by rupertpupkin » June 12th, 2020, 5:48 pm

I reckon blackbirds wouldn't taste much better. Lovely write. Thanks for sharing it


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Re: Of Birds And Shoes

Post by rupertpupkin » March 24th, 2021, 3:58 am

Well done on a most deserving spotlight for this


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