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Winter

Post by DreamerSeeker » December 1st, 2018, 12:49 pm

Snowflakes are falling
the cool air kisses my face
childhood memories awaken


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Re: Winter

Post by jainrohit » December 1st, 2018, 1:01 pm

So sweet these memories are. A time that will never come by. The flow of the memories is evidenced in the wording of the Haiku. TFS amd enjoyed reading ! I wish it were snowing in our area too ..


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Re: Winter

Post by DreamerSeeker » December 1st, 2018, 4:13 pm

Thank you so much for reading! :)


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Re: Winter

Post by RogueInk » December 13th, 2018, 8:15 pm

Bet the small snowflakes reminded you of the bigger snowmen(or women) you used to make.


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Re: Winter

Post by DreamerSeeker » December 16th, 2018, 9:29 am

RogueInk wrote:
December 13th, 2018, 8:15 pm
Bet the small snowflakes reminded you of the bigger snowmen(or women) you used to make.
Yep, snowmen, snow angels, snowball fights, snow forts, sled riding, etc.
Lol, Thank you for reading my haiku!


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