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Hazy_
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by Hazy_ » August 1st, 2017, 8:26 am
..and I turn the pages of my book,
the ink still old ,
but the pages fresh and new - awaiting
a drop of the same ink..
What if after you die God asks you "So, how was heaven?"
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SirDaniel
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by SirDaniel » August 1st, 2017, 9:08 pm
old ink tells this reader that the book has been a long time into writing.. fresh pages in front of him says there is still more to write yet the fact he is waiting shows perhaps slowing down.. much enjoyed.
Daniel
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Hazy_
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by Hazy_ » August 2nd, 2017, 2:40 am
You got it right Daniel :)
What if after you die God asks you "So, how was heaven?"
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jwesley
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by jwesley » August 2nd, 2017, 12:44 pm
"...the ink still old." I perceive this to mean quite old and maybe the inkwell has dried up and will never touch the pages again... the thought(s) forever lost.
j.
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jwesley
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by jwesley » August 2nd, 2017, 12:46 pm
"...the ink still old." I perceive this to me quite old and maybe the inkwell has dried up and will never touch the pages again... the "thought(s) forever lost.
j.
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Hazy_
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by Hazy_ » August 2nd, 2017, 6:29 pm
It can be thought as death and a new beginning too ,indicating circle of life and death where we all are stuck in...Thanks j
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Rosella
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by Rosella » August 6th, 2017, 4:47 am
I like these verses, one of my favorite. Like how it written.
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Hazy_
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by Hazy_ » August 8th, 2017, 12:44 am
Thanks Rosella :)
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by rupertpupkin » November 10th, 2018, 3:09 am
Wonderful writing and a super life metaphor make this a neat poem. Well done on the spotlight.
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Hazy_
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by Hazy_ » November 10th, 2018, 7:48 am
Thanks rupertpupkin
What if after you die God asks you "So, how was heaven?"