Only the Good Notes

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mangodog
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Only the Good Notes

Post by mangodog » July 10th, 2015, 5:51 pm

I wish for you
only the good notes

but Life is the composer
and He’s mastered
the
whole
keyboard
. . . . .



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Re: Only the Good Notes

Post by Windsend » July 10th, 2015, 10:10 pm

Hey dude, I can see that your dry spell has all dried up. <-----Did you see the pun? This is an absolutely freaking amazing poem. I love the entire thing, through and through, again and again, over and over. Thanks for posting. What a gem!


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Re: Only the Good Notes

Post by Jerryk » July 12th, 2015, 8:33 am

So true, Mangodog;
life is the slipshod keyboard player who may endow us with a handful of pleasing notes as well as those jarring clinkers. Nice one, :smile:
Jerry


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Re: Only the Good Notes

Post by CarolynKleefeld » July 12th, 2015, 5:51 pm

Beautiful and brilliant; masterfully and succinctly composed-- a gem!



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Re: Only the Good Notes

Post by dwells » July 13th, 2015, 8:08 pm

I always liked the Gregorian chants and the darkly mystical compositions in minor key harmonies. The bad notes don't get much play. Cheers Drew and a noble gesture in verse well-said - cheers! - Dan


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