Time and Eternity. ( Sonnet )

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Post by Mizzy » December 29th, 2014, 4:49 am

Thank you Azfar for your kind visit,
and your thoughts on this one.....

Mick.


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Post by Ladywildalice » December 31st, 2014, 4:35 pm

Very enjoyable read and a most enviable Sonnet, so very well deserving of the Spotlight. Congratulations.
An excellent choice, and outstanding write. Your talent is justly displayed with this piece. Thank you and again, congratulations. Sue


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Post by Larsen M. Callirhoe » January 1st, 2015, 11:04 am

Hi mizzy you left me spellbound reading your words. So much to daydream over where to begin. Wish we all could have these images visualized you paint so beautifully and vividly on your masterpiece to behold.


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Post by dornicks » January 2nd, 2015, 2:48 pm

An appropriate piece,flowing well and with a nice rhyme scheme to help it along. Congratulations on the Spotlight,

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Post by LorettaYoung » January 2nd, 2015, 4:43 pm

Mick: The rhythm and flow of this sonnet is pure inspiration; a slow waltz with life with every breath to be cherished, with beauty and love. Wonderfully written, your sonnets are a delight. Loretta



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Re: Time and Eternity. ( Sonnet )

Post by Mizzy » January 2nd, 2015, 5:22 pm

Thank you dear Sue,
for your special review.....

Regards...Mick.


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Re: Time and Eternity. ( Sonnet )

Post by Mizzy » January 2nd, 2015, 5:24 pm

You're very kind Victor,
Thank you......

Regards....Mick.


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Post by Mizzy » January 2nd, 2015, 5:25 pm

Thank you for your kind visit Dornicks,

Regards.....Mick.


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Re: Time and Eternity. ( Sonnet )

Post by Mizzy » January 2nd, 2015, 5:27 pm

Many thanks Loretta,
for your lovely review....

Much appreciated ....Mick.


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Re: Time and Eternity. ( Sonnet )

Post by LorettaYoung » January 2nd, 2015, 6:25 pm

Mizzy: your sonnets are always sweet with beautiful flow and rhythm; and this one rings with excitement. Beautiful sonnet Mick. Bravo, Loretta



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Re: Time and Eternity. ( Sonnet )

Post by Mizzy » January 24th, 2015, 8:45 pm

Thanks again Loretta,
You're most kind.....

Mick.


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Re: Time and Eternity. ( Sonnet )

Post by LorettaYoung » January 25th, 2015, 6:46 pm

Mick: how did I miss this glorious piece; as always, your wonderful smooth rhythm without force and that tinge of old world charm. Bravo and congratulations. Best Loretta



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Re: Time and Eternity. ( Sonnet )

Post by karrie » February 15th, 2015, 10:56 pm

This is so lovely and beautiful!



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