"I immerse myself in water so hot,
hoping that it will burn every feeling
that I had for you out of my body"
Favourite lines in this painful but beautiful write, although there were many to choose from. The poem captures a very accurate palette of feelings felt after rejection. You mix effective imagery with the mundane act of showering to paint a more recognizable picture. Interesting use of visuals also.
Bathing in Blue Light (IK)
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